Mind- Empty of Thoughts!
Heart- All Devoid of Feelings!!
Haiku, poem, poetry
Eid: Some Words!
A CHRISTMAS GIFT!
Your last line says it all! That’s how it is in a trance.
Very well-written Haiku. 🙂
I do respect your choice. And, of course the third line sounds the most convincing! Thank you so much for your leading comment! 🙂
Suresh, the state of trance is some times due to overflowing of emotions too…
Aisa bhi hota hai kabhi
Likhne baithe hai haal
Aur behaal ho jaye tabhi…
Yes, you are right! The main thing is that people lose their own control in trance. They just get controlled. And, such nice lines on the impact of trance! So creative you are! Thank you, Shahin! 🙂
Wonderful haiku! Indeed, full of meaning!:)
🙂 My job is to serve something, and yours is to add sense to it. Thank you, Sagittarian!
very well written haiku ! Impressive ! 🙂
🙂 Welcome, Kitty! Thank you so much!!
Eleven words were enough to describe the whole poem!…….
words are light,
but feelings are deep!
letters are few,
but story is big!
picture is apt,
and the haiku so neat! 🙂
It feels that you have felt the haiku from every possible angle. That’s why you have come up with such a beautiful expression. Thank you so much for adding a new meaning to my attempt.
Thanks a lot. Keep cheering and sharing with us, will you? 🙂
Why are you so close-fisted in regard to adding a few more words as your lovely comment. Anyway, your dot line followed by a good smile is enough to meet the needs of more words.
Just joking, friend! 🙂
Hi, you said it all!:) Sounds it’s me sometimes.:( ngek..:( lols..
Thanks for feeling so! Hope you will like the next one, too. 🙂
very well written. keep coming. just nice. 🙂
Thank you so much for your encouragement! Keep reminding me, please! 🙂
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