The rhythms of Heartbeats rippling across Mind



This attempt of mine on the frame below is something once rippled  away from some unknown corner of my heart about four months ago. And, I am introducing it as a blog post so that you may have a look at it and let me know what exactly it is like to you.


I thought I was so brave, so bold, and so bold!
could I easily face;and,
in my heart, the oceans of pains and pangs I could smilingly hold!

But, in fact,
what I felt and found
my brave, bold heart started aching mildly!
some words had pierced into it unknowingly!
I didn’t take it otherwise,
Cos my wise mind had already assured me sympathetically!


This morning, I got up with unbearable pains in my left chest!
What I witnessed was
my mouth was agape, wordless and speechless;
my eyes were shedding the NILE
my mind,
all shocked, so still and totally thoughtless;
My soul appeared sobbing before me, and
let me know that
my heart had been irreparably wounded
by the piercing words that had pricked into it the day before;
and now,
my dear heart is losing courage, seems to be tending to be in eternal rest!!

Good heavens! Of late I’ve realized how tender is my heart!
Good gracious! Got shattered, oh, my lovely poor heart!!


Comments on: "GOT SHATTERED!" (19)

  1. good with full emotions!! i hope your heart is doing well!!

  2. I could feel the sadness and you’re so broken-hearted. Bet this is based on your feeling and you had expressed it so well. A very sad poem. Frustration accompanied with a loss could be felt in the poem. Excellent and brilliant!

    • Of course, felt too sad to express how sad. Just collecting the scattered broken pieces back to fix them in their right places. But, don’t get sad just to go through the sad poem, but just enjoy reading it with sadness at bay!!
      Thank you!!

  3. You have beautifully expressed feelings of pain through this poem…don’t feel sad ..Keep smiling 🙂

    • 🙂 Thanks! Hope you will keep sharing SMILES this way.
      But, several friends seem to have forgotten to smile. I don’t know why, do you?

  4. why do you ?

    • Well,… simply a curiosity of mine… . Just asking why so. …. Felt it that way and nothing more beyond the limitation that I have to realize… . Just scanning my heart, my mind for the lapse on my part, ..just doing so… just, just trying to enjoy the way I am having to feel.
      Anyway, you are not one of them at least.

  5. oh I don’t know 😀

  6. Cos my wise mind had already assured me sympathetically!
    Good heavens! Of late I’ve realized how tender is my heart!
    lovely piece of work!!!
    i would say ur heart never-ever shatter doing such nice proses!!

    • 🙂 Thank you!
      Got shattered my heart did! But, just as I started to connect the words into the proses, the shattered pieces started to get stuck to each other for the heart to survive. So composing prose and poetry has been an excuse for its surviving longer.

  7. You’re very expressive with words…we can read all emotions and feelings here.
    brilliant !

    • Hearty Thanks!
      Whenever I get touched and moved, I just try to let them out through some words. Sometimes they take a form of a poem, and sometimes a prose. But, I would love to have poetic expressions a lot. What about you?
      Hope you will pay such a wonderful visit so soon again. 🙂

  8. That’s very deep. Hope you are doing well.

    • Thanks for your friendly concern!
      Of course, doing well, since I feel happy to see lots of known and unknown caring friends around me offering good wishes!
      And, their comment always signals me to the light at the end of the tunnel!
      Thanks once again! 🙂

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