The rhythms of Heartbeats rippling across Mind

Haiku: TRANCE

 TRANCE

 

 

Mind- Empty of Thoughts!

Heart- All Devoid of Feelings!!

Actions- Robotic!!!

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Comments on: "Haiku: TRANCE" (16)

  1. Your last line says it all! That’s how it is in a trance.
    Very well-written Haiku. :)

  2. Suresh, the state of trance is some times due to overflowing of emotions too…

    Aisa bhi hota hai kabhi
    Likhne baithe hai haal
    Aur behaal ho jaye tabhi…

    • Yes, you are right! The main thing is that people lose their own control in trance. They just get controlled. And, such nice lines on the impact of trance! So creative you are! Thank you, Shahin! :)

  3. Wonderful haiku! Indeed, full of meaning!:)

  4. very well written haiku ! Impressive ! :)

  5. Eleven words were enough to describe the whole poem!…….

    words are light,
    but feelings are deep!
    letters are few,
    but story is big!
    picture is apt,
    and the haiku so neat! :)

    • Hi Aakriti!
      It feels that you have felt the haiku from every possible angle. That’s why you have come up with such a beautiful expression. Thank you so much for adding a new meaning to my attempt.
      Thanks a lot. Keep cheering and sharing with us, will you? :)

    • Hello, Geet!
      Why are you so close-fisted in regard to adding a few more words as your lovely comment. Anyway, your dot line followed by a good smile is enough to meet the needs of more words.
      Just joking, friend! :)

  6. Hi, you said it all!:) Sounds it’s me sometimes.:( ngek..:( lols..

  7. very well written. keep coming. just nice. :)

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