The rhythms of Heartbeats rippling across Mind

Haiku: Balance


I feel your presence
Your absence equally, too
That’s what keeps me sane!
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  1. Simply awesome! You struck the right chord. Presence is felt equally as absence. That keeps the feeling balanced and of course, sane!

    Loved this Haiku. :)

  2. Bahot khoob !!! What a balance to express your emotions in few words…thousands of words are not enough to reach the height of your beautiful thoughts…keep it up Suresh !!!

  3. Kya baat hai! Pehli baar aapke comment box pe hindi me comment dekha hai………so just can’t resist adding my words too! hehehehe…..

    haiku is so meaningful…..having someone and again missing them till they arrive again, makes our life more exciting.or perhaps more sane! :)

    • Ei khusnasiv mera HAIKU: BALANCE, baras rahe hai tum par Hindi me dil ki bate.
      Kabhi kuchh sabd ham bol dete hai Hindi me.
      Najane kabhi-kabhi kuchh arz hota hai Urdu me.
      Sikhane ka irada hai, aur koshis karta hu thoda jo bhate hai Dil me!
      …. Thanks for your hearty words, Aakriti! :)

  4. This is great ! One of your finest haiku ! :)

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  7. liked it :)wow

  8. awesome Suresh :) where is my last comment its nt visible :-o

    • Do you know Geeta ( Geet :-o … :)) God’s mill grinds slow, but sure!! Your comment did appear normally because of some technical problems. Anyway, I could solve them.
      Me and awesome! Thanks :)

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